Public Feedback

To receive further feedback from the general public rather than simply the media class, me Josh and Heather tweeted the above tweet and we showed our class in form. In form we presented the video and asked people to go onto SurveyMonkey; for social media, I attached the finished second draft of our OTS from Vimeo and a survey for people to fill out on Survey Monkey on a tweet (shown below). Unfortunately to embed a survey you have to pay for SurveyMonkey premium so I can only attach the screenshot and link of the survey.

The tweet to 506 followers on Twitter

Public Survey

Below is some of the feedback that we received:

Unfortunately, we did not receive a large amount of feedback. If we were to do the process again I think that we should force the survey onto people; as we were really lenient with the survey, a lot of people did not do this and on Twitter people probably did not want to click on the links.

The Feedback Received After The First Viewing

After the class watched our first draft as shown below:

Each student filled out a questionnaire (as shown in previous blog post), below is an Emaze presentation outlining the feedback that we received:




I personally found this experience very helpful as we asked people with experience of Film Noirs and as others viewed it, they spotted errors that we did not notice (for example Heather's trip whilst walking) this allowed us to edit the errors out before the holiday break which is really beneficial and time-efficient for us.

The Secret First Draft Unfinished

To complete the film by next week, we decided that we need feedback. The unfinished version does not include a gunshot foley sound but we would like as much feedback ready for next week.
Here is the embedded video for viewing from the class:

The Secret RabbitHole Productions Draft 1 (unfinished) from Matthew Levesley on Vimeo.

Please take your time to fill out this questionnaire (created by myself):

Unfortunately, after embedding the survey within this post, it closed after 24 hours and it was not able to be viewed. I have simply included a screenshot from Google Forms and the feedback will be posted at a later stage.