The Secret First Draft Unfinished

To complete the film by next week, we decided that we need feedback. The unfinished version does not include a gunshot foley sound but we would like as much feedback ready for next week.
Here is the embedded video for viewing from the class:

The Secret RabbitHole Productions Draft 1 (unfinished) from Matthew Levesley on Vimeo.

Please take your time to fill out this questionnaire (created by myself):

Unfortunately, after embedding the survey within this post, it closed after 24 hours and it was not able to be viewed. I have simply included a screenshot from Google Forms and the feedback will be posted at a later stage.